Before and After Editing with Nicolas Di Tempora

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Story, meaning and value are the three intentions behind every structural editing, copy editing and proofreading decision I make with


It’s in the idea you wish to express.

It’s in the words that you finally choose.

It’s in the narrative within every sentence.

And it’s in what the reader takes out of your sentences.

This adjusting of the input (by the writer) and determining of the out-take (by the audience) is the difference between generic content and quality content.

It’s also the difference between insipid writing and inspiring writing.

Clear, concise and compelling writing always begins and ends with clear, precise and insightful thinking.

I see my job as enabling you to be your very best.